Feedback

Below is some of the feedback we received from our audience, we made sure to ask them what their thoughts are and how we could improve our film if we were to do it again. The responses are from year 11 and 12 classes of approximately 15 to 20 students so each answer is a collective representation of what the classes thought about our short film we chose these groups because they fit the criteria for our ideal target audience.

Murray

What are thoughts on the film?

It was very good

Was it well made?

Yes we thought so

What are your opinions on the storyline?

Don’t take drugs, quite funny though, not too serious. In other words a light hearted appeal to stay away from drugs.

What would you rate the film out of 10?

7.5/10

What constructive criticism would you give if we were to make the film again?
Although the acting was good we thought it was a bit repetitive on the bed, we thought Elliot was very natural but the other two need to be a bit more in character instead of being themselves, the conversation could flow a bit better between Jasmine and Leighton.

Is it easily comprehendible?

Very

Falzon

What are thoughts on the film?

Well done, overall an engaging film. 

Was it well made?

Yes, clear visual and sound quality except for the night club scenes where the imagery was a little grainy.

What are your opinions on the storyline?

The plot was carefully constructed with parallel realities.  Very clever and maintained the viewer’s interest.

What would you rate the film out of 10?

8

What constructive criticism would you give if we were to make the film again? 

Try to make the quality throughout the film consistent where possible.

Is it easily comprehendible?

Yes

John

What are thoughts on the film?

It was a very good film we enjoyed watching it. 

Was it well made?

We thought the film was very well made with very effective transitions between the different sections.

What are your opinions on the storyline?

The plot was easy to pick up and was sustained throughout the film.

I presume the voice distortion was intended and was part of the film.

What would you rate the film out of 10?

7.5

What constructive criticism would you give if we were to make the film again? 

If you were to make it again I would suggest possibly a wider range of camera angles/shot interspersed with the main wide angle shooting.

Is it easily comprehendible?

Yes